Hello! I wrote an essay for the APPLICATION FOR International Scholar Award (which is a grant given to first-year students with the most outstanding academic achievements.)
Only 4 students will get this so I want to make sure that I am one of them.
I need professional editing to bring my essay and the ideas in it to the ideal.
There are no specific rules or instructions, the main thing is to keep the main ideas that I used and make them more memorable and well-written. But I’m also open to your ideas in context if you think it will make my essay more winning.